When the day comes when i die
And go up to the sky
Nothing but your face i will try
To remember
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wow i like this one :) hope to be hearing more of you and waiting to read more of your poems
i dont usually like love poems... but this was nice, ... i supose... 10 from me.
a swaying piece, that makes one become lost whilst reading it, very tender poem.read my poem.
oh! ! ! ...what a moving poem this is! ! ! ......GREAT....a touching poem, very significant.......and it's true love.....keeeeeeeeeeep on writing your wonderful poems :) :) :) ........
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ops! so very nice and cool. u show us the real poem. that what i name a poem. and also an accustomed expression...lovely...well done
it's really unbelievable.....it's touching....it's awsome....and it's true love
a touching poem, very significant for those who love excessively....
wonderful, lovely write, do not cry, love is eternal. perfect poem in my book except for the misspelling of some words. thank you very much for sharing.
its rerally good......................i liked it alot i thought it got to the point
Ah! Love.....and its shown in each and every words of thi marvellous write....very beautiful write, indeed...thanks 10++ rgds asif
A wonderful poem. Love & hugs..............