Excerpt From A Confused Mind Comments
Fractured thoughts, spiralling around a tainted spire;
Clusters of hope lie, scattered in the borrowed wasteland;
Depths of despair, plunging to uncharted territory;
Silhouettes of silence, marauding around a state of mind;
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Actually, what you describe here is a normal mind. Who hasn't experienced these same feelings at one time or another? This is what life does to us. We all deal with it in different ways, but we all go through it. A very well expressed poem.
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7/23/2025 6:32:03 PM # 1.0.0
i wished, i waited, i wanted to find... more hope for the future... in your confused mind. bri :)