Friday, July 24, 2009

Excepted Comments

Rating: 4.5

She told herself
This time would be different
She would be herself
She would them
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Alyssa Ray
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Deborah Cromer 01 August 2009

Wow. Not what I expected. The ending asks such a big question. To be accepted and not shut out is more important than most know. You touch on a very sensitive subject here. Excepting and excluding has no fairness. Deborah Cromer

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it's really beautiful alyssa. it sounds like me.

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Shekhar Joshi 24 July 2009

thats sad.......i can surely identify with this kind of feeling....when u r left alone............but hey i didn't put the blade on my skin......somehow over the years i learned to let it go..... nicely written...... ;) hey the spelling of excepted should be accepted here......

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