Thursday, September 17, 2009

Except The Present Comments

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Even as you're walking from the beach
the sun is fading on your skin.
Even as you're waking up, shaking
the trails of your dreams are withdrawing
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Old Teenage Poems
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Ro'ya Abdulaal 17 September 2009

Great use of descriptive language, nicely picked words and greatly expressed idea. Well done

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