Except For Me Comments

wow... this is amazing... my fav.: D

This poem narrates some of the complexities of life. As a lover of poetry, your poem helps me accept life's beauty and uglyness as just life.. live it in the best and worst... for such is life! Keep writing, you're good so, keep writing from your heart...I love and enjoy your work and thanks for your invitation.When time permits, read some of my work and take a peek into my soul, too.

I like the use of the refrain 'except for me' - very moving

You have used great contrast in your poem....good job...the words speak pain