Excellent Blossom Poem by Cigeng Zhang

Excellent Blossom

Rating: 5.0


I am in the bleak season
Seeing an isolated tree of pear
I fly to the tree like a pigeon
Pear flowers pour down on my feather

I dart onto the deep scented ground
and pick up each piece with pleasure
I feel there is no winter to me around
Only the pear blossoms, brewing a pure land

Monday, November 7, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: poet,poetry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharati Nayak 22 January 2017

An excellent blossom it is as its scent overwhelms me !

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Christopher Tye 18 November 2016

Wonderful poem, like the pear tree a thing of great beauty.

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Aarzoo Mehek 15 November 2016

your words has the power to tap a sleeping heart. beautiful poem.10

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Sareena Asrar 11 November 2016

Really you are a wonderful writer. just tell me how do you write so beautifully.

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Daniel Brick 09 November 2016

This is the lyric poem which has occurred just before that ULTIMATE POEM I predicted in my comment on thw. You may write a dozen more lyric poems before you write that ultimate one. But you have written the poem which waits next the open space that ULTIMATE POEM will occupy. It only a matter of time, because the three recent poems I've just commented on share a common energy. It seems to me you are making your own destiny happen in the clarity of your vision. There will be more depression, more waiting, more human life! And then your ultimate poem will be written and you will have the answer you seek, the life you desire.

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