Tuesday, September 26, 2017

Exasperating Life Comments

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Life has a way of exasperating us through experiences that leave
us empty and at a loss, not knowing which way to turn, remember-
ing that life is temporary and this too shall pass.
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RoseAnn V. Shawiak
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Daniel Brick 28 September 2017

All three of these stanzas ends with an admission of how hard it is to deal with some of the non-negotiable events in life. But your poem is written from the other side of things, after you have weathered at least part of these hardships and have some confidence the rest can be dealt with. It's amazing, isn't, that you can write a poem and mere words have such power over these deep sorrows. But given the right mind set and a pure heart - both of which you have - the words do succeed.

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RoseAnn V. Shawiak

RoseAnn V. Shawiak

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