Examinations Of Our Minds Comments

Thank you Ernestine. My commas, Linda, some have gone, I must admit it reads OK without, just doesn't seem so long! Thanks to both of you for your comments. Sincerely

Now that is a clever one Egal, I enjoyed reading this very much, it certainly teaches us a few things which we should remember. Sincerely Ernestine

An interesting poem, Egal, approaching monumental. You could lose the commas though; let the words flow. The sentiments come over well and I like the serpents line. Linda