Examination Comments

nice poem set in the real situation....i liked the use of qp and bp...kp penning..

The first line of “Eerie silence...” stops one immediately. Lot of action in the next two lines, then the pace slows down in more of a thinking mood. The three OUTs help to exite the exiting with an unexpected confessions. Well done.

thoughtful expression i give it 100 if possible

Thoughtful expression... your style of composition nice! 10+++

good poem; very well penned You have the right tech. to bring out the right feeling in the reader...good going............10

how true when you said that people dont remember god on normal trouble free days! ! ! ...a good poem...but sure there are ways to improve...but still...the way you have shown the tension during examinations are good...