You are truth, glory and all that abounds
You are love, magic and beautiful sounds
You created life and gave us reason
To cherish time with each passing season
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i am really impressed by your style and your stunning rhyming....i don't know why they give us some rusty poems at school to memorize and they leave such poems............haha......thanks for sharing my friend and please dont stop writing..
This is very well written indeed.. But last line hmmmm, ., .. death is the price we must all pay! ! ! ! Sometimes I get fed up with real world though, ... filled with treachery isn't it? ? ..... But we do need beautiful people to make this world shine... very good poem, .. like the free flowing manner in which you express yourself.., good 10++ love shan
I think it's really insightful and altogether a good write. I think that it could be tweaked a little though and made into a great write. But, it's good. :)
this is beautifully written. the words on this page jumped out at me for all that you said is reality. some poems may come and go, but this one here will make you glow. excellent write a double ten
Debrah: What a beautifully written poem, I love the rythmetic nature of your poetry I must give you a 10 +++ What a Great God you describe. Thanks.You may want to try my 'God Weeps'
Very spiritually uplifting and beautiful.you might like to read my poem To All He Brings...another ten...
Deborah, This has to be one of the most beautiful poems of faith I have ever read. I love the rhyming and structure and the beauty of your words. Just a magnificent piece written by a wonderful lady. God Bless and God Speed, Your friend Lynn