James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
Thursday, July 6, 2023

Ex - Wife Talk Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the depths of longing, my heart does dwell,
Seeking solace in words I must now tell.
A chapter closed, yet echoes still remain,
I find myself yearning to speak again.
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James McLain
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M. Asim Nehal 07 July 2023

I think you poured your heart to write about your Ex-Wife. Crafty poem indeed. Full ******

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Kim Barney 06 July 2023

A poem full of hope. Well done, James, and I wish the best for you. Five stars.

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Bri Edwards 06 July 2023

I TRIED TO ADD MORE STARS BY VOTING MULTIPLE TIMES.....BUT THAT IS NOT ALLOWED. ; (((

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Bri Edwards 06 July 2023

HOWEVER, let me say this about 'ERRORS' I FIND in many, many poets' poems on PH: I like to find the 'errors' on PH, but 'I DON'T FIND ANY HERE TODAY! ! ' Darn. I LIKE to find TYPOS etc., on PH & in library books. bri ;)

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Bri Edwards 06 July 2023

Best wishes to you and your 'X'. Let me know when the wedding will be; THAT's a 'little joke'. Don't CHOKE on it, please. bri ;)

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Bri Edwards 06 July 2023

Having 3 ex-wives myself, and knowing a bit from you about YOUR past, I CAN STRONGLY-APPRECIATE, more than most perhaps, the story described by your VERY well-chosen words. (cont.)

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Bri Edwards 06 July 2023

When and IF I sponsor another poem 'showcase' HERE, of other members' poems, on PoemHunter, I HOPE i REMEMBER TO PUT.....EX - WIFE TALK....AT THE TOP OF MY LIST. AMAZING! ! !

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Bri Edwards 06 July 2023

James, OH MY GOD! ! ! ! ! ! ! HOW COME I CAN ONLY GIVE YOU FIVE (5) STARS! ? ? ? ? I'D LIKE TO GIVE YOU & THIS POEM ABOUT 40 STARS! ! ! ! ! ! ! (CONT.)

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James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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