Ex- Girlfriends Comments

From the 'uncertain drops of anguish', the words in this poem don't just flow, they cascade to expose a surge of thoughts and images that ultimately beguile. The blending of shapes, colours and confusion give this poem an abstract quality that is both vbrant and lasting. justine.

This is a very fine poem and its worthy of the writer. GW62

A really good intense read beautifully written as allways Thanks Nik

Ahh, bro...the very creatures that can make or break a man, I'm really not the one that can comment to be honest..as I'm still lost in this world waiting to be saved..but I love your magical way with expression...genius mate.. Stay strong Jon

That is actually a seriously clever piece. (Try having ex boyfriends though and then think yourself lucky. :)) t x

My kind of poem! I enjoyed it immensely. Thanks David.

Yeay! This is the new poem? I like it very much: Uncertain drops / Of anguish / Filter through the night / While waste water / Droplets / Remove any light... Every new poem is better and better. I like the lightness of the metre and of the style of this one.

This is superb! Brilliant cadence to it. HG: -) xx

confusion reigns supreme in the wee small hours looking back over what could have been but is not

the proof... you are not getting anywhere near my....... (like what you do with water though!)

great poem. lots of confusion running rampant in the back of the mind. i really enjoyed this one. lately you've been hitting my target well enough. thanks chief smoke.

How accurately does this describe the confusion of emotions running through one's head during a breakup...Very wonderful writing. I enjoyed reading this very much...it captured the feelings to the 't' of how a breakup is.