Friday, May 13, 2011

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Rating: 5.0

You gave him your love
Not realising he lies

Your heart was his
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palesa deejay manaleng
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 13 May 2011

Great poem. Remarkable imagery with plenty of wisdom. Wonderfully written. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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