Wednesday, July 31, 2013

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Rating: 4.5

With the helicopters whirring their pale brown descent,
and the squirrels purring in trees where they don’t pay rent,
the birds hop from the sidewalk to the trees,
wings propelling them on the white-blue breeze,
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Jesse Ellsbury
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Khairul Ahsan 13 August 2013

A nice poem with good rhyme. Words and phrases are appropriate. An apt question at the end: if we are so evolved, then where are the jobs for us?

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Jesse Ellsbury

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