Friday, July 22, 2005
Evolution Comments
Rating: ★4.0
Indignant wounds of disappointment
Fortify this world of walls,
But she is indomitable
And will not be destroyed
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7/20/2025 8:59:22 AM # 1.0.0
I think your language is quite sophisticated and nuanced. I don't actually 'see' any concrete images. I think bringing the poem a little more down to earth, grounding it in an actual situation, would make it much more striking. See what other people say.