Thursday, October 22, 2015

Evolution Comments

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One day through evolution
We’ll deal by means of thoughts.
We’ll find the best solutions-
There’ll be no lie at all.
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Liza Sud
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Daniel Brick 25 October 2015

You linked two amazing ideas in this poem, first an evolution of humanity into more rational beings who can think themselves into a more ethical societal order, but in the next stanza consider the fact in death's twilight kingdom (eliot) we will not be able to deceive each through appearances, which would perforce eliminate deception and manipulation. And automatically make a more ethical societal order. Even though it would arrive past its time it's still a provocative concept.

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