Evolution Comments

as we go through the process of life everything must change. evolve to the next level. a thoughtful write

old age is not towards completion of a life rather begining of a new era to confer some immortal expression n impression to this world. beautifully penned. with warm regards

I really like this one. Very powerful, accurate, and all-encompassing in its scope. I especially like the repetition of shadowed tones. What a wonderful phrase!

What a gorgeous poem, thank you for share! Yes indeed, I also feel that inside of us is sleeping a tremendous power. Would I live to see the day when our fully awaken mind will have the word?

i feel like i repeat myself so ill just say WOW and be done with it :)

A powerful message about the advancement of man in this fast changing world! Great write and thought provoking!

The dawn shall come, albeit in shadowed tones/ to rise up: : : : : : : 'tis a great poem! ! ! ! !

Seeping into man’s being and stealing the darkness A nice poem of hope even when all things are changing. Thank you.

I am appreciative of the note but actually saw it as intended and agree. A finy crafted and insightful poem.

Consciousness will definitely reach higher levels, not on earth while alive but after death somewhere else! This is what I feel! Whatever it be, the poem is a joy to read!

I agree with David. everything in moderation nice write

Growing old is a sobering and sombre thought for some but it can be done gracefully. A lovely poem Val.

Sombre is the dawn when old age beckons. A sad little poem which says so much between its lines. Thanks for sharing BB =: OD

Change is like ageing and has to be accommodated as a fact. Valerie, this time the brevity has made your write more effective.

So they say Nothing is permanent except CHANGE, so no matter for the shadowed tones, for these are the foil for the bright dawn...Evlution is the essence! ! !

A wonderful poem, everything must change in the end. Even the things we would like to stay the same.

lifting the mind above all things, good write.