Sunday, November 19, 2017

Evils Spring Comments

Rating: 5.0

The moon is full and ominous
Pail starless night grows ravenous
Lanes grow dim and fog devours
Spectres roam the twilight hours
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Kevin Patrick
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Susan Williams 10 December 2017

I whole-heartedly agree with Paul below- this poem should become Halloween's anthem like Twas the Night Before Christmas is for Christmas! You end-rhymed so gracefully! ! ! ! My verses sound strained and downright tortured when I try end-rhyming so I totally appreciate the talent it takes to write so flowingly as you just did. 10++++++

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Paul Brookes 23 November 2017

A chilling piece on to recite on Halloween a great piece of rhyming poetry and when it is done well as here is a joy to read.1O++

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