Wednesday, May 2, 2012

Evil World... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Caught in the shackles of this evil world
I long to go back to the time when I took birth
Go back to those days when I flew free
Back to those days when everyone loved me
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Aishwarya Singh
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Romeo Della Valle 27 May 2012

A very deep and thought provoking write that clearly shows your talent and admirable ways of thinking! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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Rules are not chains, that restrict your freedom, though transition period is tough, you may evolve as a better breed.

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Aishwarya Singh 06 May 2012

thanks a lot :) :) :)

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Shihabudheen K J 06 May 2012

Great message.everyperson irrespective of caste and creed do think about going back to the infant state.its pure and protected.i loved this work aish.

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Ramesh Rai 02 May 2012

nice poem, keep it up

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