Sun scorched barren ground
Like spreading lines on shattered glass
Cracks split wide the arid terrain
Thirsting for much needed water
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Thirsting for much needed water good line. this is very good. good job. Crystal
Very vivid words that put the reader into the scene. Great poem, TJ! A '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn
Hi TJ - what a brilliant write - to capture this in a poetic way, quite something, well done, Tia 10
Poignant and soul searching poem TJ....this world saddens me and I am often ashamed of the human race....fantastic write my friend, I know you are passionate about Mother Earth and I have the greatest respect for your views.......10/10+++...*dc* xx
While I do not believe in the theroy of Global warming, I do love this piece! ! ! Well written and it flowed beautifully! ! ! Bravo a double ten! ! Linda
Thirsting for much needed water good line. this is very good. good job. Crystal