Sunday, December 7, 2008

Evil Wind Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sun scorched barren ground
Like spreading lines on shattered glass
Cracks split wide the arid terrain
Thirsting for much needed water
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T.James Becker
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*Trusting You* 18 December 2008

Thirsting for much needed water good line. this is very good. good job. Crystal

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*Trusting You* 18 December 2008

Thirsting for much needed water good line. this is very good. good job. Crystal

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 09 December 2008

wow...good subject and a wonderful write, thanks TJ.10+

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Marilyn Lott 08 December 2008

Very vivid words that put the reader into the scene. Great poem, TJ! A '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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Tom Balch 08 December 2008

Great piece, great subject, well done TJ 10/10 regards Tom

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Tia Maria 08 December 2008

Hi TJ - what a brilliant write - to capture this in a poetic way, quite something, well done, Tia 10

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Dream Catcher 07 December 2008

Poignant and soul searching poem TJ....this world saddens me and I am often ashamed of the human race....fantastic write my friend, I know you are passionate about Mother Earth and I have the greatest respect for your views.......10/10+++...*dc* xx

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Linda Winchell 07 December 2008

While I do not believe in the theroy of Global warming, I do love this piece! ! ! Well written and it flowed beautifully! ! ! Bravo a double ten! ! Linda

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T.James Becker

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