Thursday, February 9, 2012

Evil That Dwells Within Comments

Rating: 4.5

I see faces that walk past me, And a shadow that stands beside me, I see you and the evil sees me.

When I am alone the evil always calls to me, The evil whispers to me but only inside my head, The evil is always around me and influencing my hatred of others.
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Connor Whyte
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Mandi June 01 January 2013

I can really relate with this piece... Gripping and full of emotion!

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Barbara Nixon 15 December 2012

Great poem, beautifully written and very powerful.

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Erica Santana 29 March 2012

great poem I like it! !

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Christine Blaydes 28 March 2012

I love this poem! So well written! Great, keep writing!

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Brianna Winebarger 24 February 2012

Great poem. Good word choice, really intense..keep writing! You have talent!

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