Monday, January 30, 2012

Evil Rising Comments

Rating: 4.5

It rises
like poison ivy
up walls of humanity
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Dave Alan Walker
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Bryony Sheldon 07 November 2018

Touching and heartfelt.

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Milkyboy Galia 27 October 2018

A very good poem dear sir.

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Akhtar Jawad 10 April 2018

Yes, the world should unite to check the evil rising anywhere in any shape.

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Terry Upham 27 March 2015

Vladimir Putin evil but not looking for war. I'm glad you recognizewhat's going on.

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True Ku 07 January 2015

love it. using this for my homework!

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Amitava Sur 01 September 2014

A lovely penning indeed. Because of our mean and selfish approach towards the society EVIL is raising it's head.We all have to stand unitedly against it to save ourselves only. You may read my poem Everybody will smile in benevolent peace ]

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Geetha Jayakumar 16 September 2013

Wonderful poem...Great message, to stop evil rising, join together as one.

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Charnele Waith 09 November 2012

so so true.. nice work

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Stan Petrovich 16 March 2012

And the Evil is many things...Things we assumed were good: cars, petroleum, making a great deal of money, spawning loads of children, Sunday drives, salty fries, fat & sugar & the lies we fashion about the creation...

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it was short but reasonable, i enjoyed it

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Cliff Ceekay 13 February 2012

wow! this is a nice piece, simple but with some sense.i like it

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Kuzo Freak 07 February 2012

O h my goshes! ! I love it: P i agree that we need to stop eveil...

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Mark Williams 07 February 2012

Hi David, it's a very topical message you have there, and completely to my way of thinking after the experiences of the last two years - my compliments to you :) Mark

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Augustus Gatlin 06 February 2012

This poem may be short, but the messgae is so powerful, I love it.

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Augustus Gatlin 06 February 2012

This poem may be short, but the messgae is so powerful, I love it.

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Augustus Gatlin 06 February 2012

Wow this poem may be short but the message is so powerful I love it.

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Njuguna Peter Mnyagia 05 February 2012

prevention is better than cure. lets try it

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 February 2012

We must become one to stop the evil rising join together as one nation... very nice n positive thinking...alas we could do it.....10

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Jahan Zeb 04 February 2012

Great, touching and makes thinking. The idea is human.... A proof poets are kind and love humanity. I bet this poem tell what you are from inside.

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Meilani Rozavian 03 February 2012

We must become one, to stop the evil rising, join together as one nation. I'll follow, list me. Thanks for your kind comment. Blessed be.

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