Evil Fire Inside Me* Comments

wow, Becca...this is a fantastic write...you said it with a tonne of passion, and kept it steamy, not smutty....love it...great job! !

AWSOME POEM! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

i love this, such a true feeling

waaa much passion can be seein in your lines.....as other ' s say its not evil.....poetic sizzling desire........sebastine...

Crackle, pop, the wood that fuels the fire snaps It falls to the bottom of the pit Where I can again hear the coals sizzle With my desire A beautiful beginning crackle-pop wood -fuel-fire snaps i like the semblance to sizzling desire great write ++++10 anjali

I like your poem but suggest you kill the word evil in the title so that it reads 'Fire Inside Me'.

nice poem. enjoyed reading it. words are powerful and strong.

wow...lol... a very nice poem with very power start...thanks 10

..as i touch the point of ignition.. oh man i love how ths is written, the visuals of ths poem..really interesting read nana, well written too word

This is really good keep it up! !

You are my new addiction...

Who told you it was evil..... ' In silence I scream out in pleasure ' great line...10/10