Saturday, September 9, 2017

Eviction Notice Comments

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I've grown accustomed to this Earth holding my chain,
Seldom have I questioned the laws that restrict me;
Yet, for adverse reasons that no one can explain,
On some unknown date Death will come to evict me
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Lora Colon
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Bri Edwards 23 September 2017

Love sent its brightest rays through my heart's prison bars...................but did they penetrate? and if they did, did they just bang around inside your heart and then shoot back out through the bars? favorite lines: Will I miss morning's dew sating the thirsty rose, Or a sudden winter's gale, blowing wild and rough? A Birthday Greeting For Lora Though not loved enough, you've come a long ways, bringing joy, I'm so sure, ..... to somebodies' dull days. So if Death does snatch you... from the life that you've led, at least rest assured you've... brought sunshine before being dead. I hope you last till this 26th of September, so that one more time you can eat cake. And have no doubt that {you} I won't remember! ** [ I'll call the bakery now, 'cause Bri doesn't bake. ] bri :) Happy Birthday! Don't forget to wear your suit on September 26. *In case the grammar here leaves any doubt: i won't forget you.............until i DO.

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Mario, Lucien, Rene Odekerken 09 September 2017

Beautiful poem. LORA THANK YOU FOR SHARING MARIO ODEKERKEN

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Lora Colon

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