Saturday, November 23, 2013

Everytime The Sun Falls In West Comments

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O do not say that you forget me
I know that we are far apart
But if you were here, you'll clearly see
That still, you're the one in my heart
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Mac Adrone Adonay
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Naida Nepascua Supnet 25 November 2013

Very nice flow of rhythm and rhyme, you will be better as the days go by, your poems are promising. Thanks for your comment on my Do Not Try, salamat ha. Sulat ka pa.

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