Sunday, May 3, 2009

Everytime It Rains...Its Beautiful... Comments

Rating: 5.0

They say u fall in love once..
But I think everytime it rains
its beautiful...
I know there is a past
...
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shweta advani
COMMENTS
Siddharth Singh 14 July 2009

Very good mam! You began and ended with the same verse. A task, not many people accomplish.

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rohit sapra 26 May 2009

This is a very meaningful poem as it lays emphasis on love and rain. These two ingredients of life surely are very essential for every living soul.

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you have connected love and rain beautifully...true the potential of love is life itself ...good write

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Afzal Shauq 10 May 2009

hmmm like it very much... inspiring a lot...it's very sweet and professionally done this poem with deep idea... yeah I am not wrong if I again say it that you are good poet with new subjects to express... sharing it if you will also like my expression of love based peace thoughts also(a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with.... afzal shauq) I am sure my this famous say will be satisfying your every worry about the humanity and social life and even friendship...yeah is the only answer to your questions raising in your mind about the happiest collective life.... yeah... we belong to same family of Adam...and we are true cousins..good friend...go on and on...10/10

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Abhilash Fraizer 10 May 2009

this one is fantastic, shweta. love it.

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Marilyn Lott 08 May 2009

How true this is. We are given a fresh new beginning when it rains. I have several poems on the subject because I love the rain as I loved your poem and gave it a '10! ' Best Wishes, Marilyn

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anurag duggal 08 May 2009

the first four lines of ur poem are magical thats all i can say I wish I had thought of them anyways my next poem will have the same title everytime it rains its beautiful thanks for the inspiration and do read it itll take 5 more minutes :)

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Fathimath Farha 03 May 2009

great write! and yes, the rain is always beautiful. i love your first stanza!

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