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This poem is so well written! I loved reading it. And yes, i do believe we are feeling the same way. Great Poem. All around 10! !

Emma, I loved this. I think most of us has fallen for someone at one time or the other who doesn't even know that we are there. Good write. Thanks for sharing and I hope we see some more. David

yea, so i totally know how you feel with this! My poems are along the same form. About someone who u love, but they don't have feelings for you. Very well written