Saturday, February 10, 2007

Everytime Comments

Rating: 5.0

Everytime i laugh it off
inside,
it makes me want to cry
because i want this love to be true
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emily summers
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Frani Bell 09 April 2007

This poem is so well written! I loved reading it. And yes, i do believe we are feeling the same way. Great Poem. All around 10! !

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David Harris 10 February 2007

Emma, I loved this. I think most of us has fallen for someone at one time or the other who doesn't even know that we are there. Good write. Thanks for sharing and I hope we see some more. David

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Frani Bell 10 February 2007

yea, so i totally know how you feel with this! My poems are along the same form. About someone who u love, but they don't have feelings for you. Very well written

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