When you put a face
When you wear a smile
That couldn't be erased
Even just for a while
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Rhymes of the poem oscillate with the thought of Everything will rhyme! Awesome! Thanks for sharing.
why are you not writing any more? my god this is totally awesome. a ten for it, and a request-that please post more of your work. i would love to read it. please read some of mine. :)
everything will rhyme indeed a brilliant piece with great flow and beautiful meaning....bravo
Bad times should be read On a page of a book Dear mirror goodbye I will see you next time Hopeful that someday Everything will just rhyme. Excellent words that I really loved. A very good poem. But wonder why no more has come after this!
A wonderfully piece on looking at one's self. The flow beautifully echoes the last stanza.
Bad times should be read on a page of a book Great line. Thank you Naida this is truly beautiful
You are so right Poetess. We have to hide our feelings. Doesn't matter if is good feelings nor not. We have to be like the others, all time. I think being a person without any love is the better for those days. But we are poet and we cant accepted that. Brilliant.
I love rhyme and this is a great little rhymer. Brief, concise and a great philosophy. I love that line-Dear mirrow goodbye. A GENUINE JOY TO READ-A10
A delightful poem of rhyming couplets. I invite you to read my poems.
A very original poem on how we hide a lot of pain and sorrow to face each new day with a clean slate, I loved the end of the poem so upbeat! Excellent write! !
A nice one in rhyme between the years gone and coming. Like your simple ink in the way your You is also a Me: -)
Great piece... flowing with sentiment... Terry