Monday, December 31, 2012

Everything Will Rhyme Comments

Rating: 4.8

When you put a face
When you wear a smile
That couldn't be erased
Even just for a while
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Naida Nepascua Supnet
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Terry O'leary 13 August 2013

Great piece... flowing with sentiment... Terry

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Rosalinda Flores Rosevoc 09 August 2013

Rhymes of the poem oscillate with the thought of Everything will rhyme! Awesome! Thanks for sharing.

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Lucifera Santez 08 August 2013

why are you not writing any more? my god this is totally awesome. a ten for it, and a request-that please post more of your work. i would love to read it. please read some of mine. :)

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Danny Draper 06 August 2013

Harmony is the essence here, nice write.

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Payal Parande 06 August 2013

everything will rhyme indeed a brilliant piece with great flow and beautiful meaning....bravo

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Khairul Ahsan 04 August 2013

Bad times should be read On a page of a book Dear mirror goodbye I will see you next time Hopeful that someday Everything will just rhyme. Excellent words that I really loved. A very good poem. But wonder why no more has come after this!

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Louis Cecile 04 August 2013

A wonderfully piece on looking at one's self. The flow beautifully echoes the last stanza.

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Anamika Jalan 03 August 2013

great one.. very deep and sensational loved it very much

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Lyn Paul 02 August 2013

Bad times should be read on a page of a book Great line. Thank you Naida this is truly beautiful

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Dave Walker 01 August 2013

A great poem, great wording and the flow is perfect.

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Poetheart Morgan 01 August 2013

You are so right Poetess. We have to hide our feelings. Doesn't matter if is good feelings nor not. We have to be like the others, all time. I think being a person without any love is the better for those days. But we are poet and we cant accepted that. Brilliant.

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Terry O'leary 01 August 2013

very nice rhyming scheme... full of feeling... Terry

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Joseph Anderson 31 July 2013

I love rhyme and this is a great little rhymer. Brief, concise and a great philosophy. I love that line-Dear mirrow goodbye. A GENUINE JOY TO READ-A10

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David Wood 30 July 2013

A delightful poem of rhyming couplets. I invite you to read my poems.

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Hazel Durham 03 February 2013

A very original poem on how we hide a lot of pain and sorrow to face each new day with a clean slate, I loved the end of the poem so upbeat! Excellent write! !

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A nice one in rhyme between the years gone and coming. Like your simple ink in the way your You is also a Me: -)

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Naida Nepascua Supnet

Naida Nepascua Supnet

bayambang, pangasinan, philippines
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