Everything That Will Not Change Comments

Amberlee, your work never fails to stun and sadden me - but when I say sadden I mean it in the best possible poetic way. The way you describe human emotion in your poems is rare, very rare indeed. It is inspirational reading. All the best, Seán.

I disagree with Mr. Hassler. I think the line he cited as depth and character. Once again, a fine poem!

I liked your poem alot. It reminded me somewhat of what I write about.

this is outstanding, Amberlee. especially the first few stanzas. very similar to anybody's fond memories. just a suggestion, you could omit the line 'How does it feel to see the world, to see life through a third eye? ' and still keep the momentum going flawlessly. well done! Jake

A little bit sad, but redeemed by poetic beauty! Thanks again for your thoughtful work!

a hurt heart bangs away at the soul but as always something different happens when the poem reaches in and pulls the true self into joy or close to it a wonderful poem

Beautifully written Amberlee! I always enjoy you work!

stunning work Amberlee.. Emotional and beautiful images Well done! HBH

A wonderful piece Amberlee and surprising also, as it is a break from your previous themes. This is looking into emotions, something that has been done over and over, but you do it well, it is almost as if I were reading a different writer (That is not to say that your other work has no value) . You have certainly made an impact since you arrived, but this piece suggests that you will be making an impact for reasons other than controversy. Oh, and I dont think that there is one spelling mistake. laffin' Denis Joe