Wednesday, June 29, 2005

Everything's Gone Comments

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Everything’s gone.

Everything’s gone tender,
gone soft,
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Tony Jolley
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Viola Grey 04 August 2008

knowing how the story unfolded hasn't eased any of the sadness of this piece...wonderful write.

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N. M. 15 September 2005

Great Tony! This poem is a sweet melody with no ending! I guess the influence of Neruda 'between the shadow and the soul' and I love your metaphor 'between a breath and a sigh' Great Tony and thank you for this melody! Friendly

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Sallie Howson 29 June 2005

nice sound, nice rhyme

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