Wednesday, August 1, 2007

Everything Is Broken Comments

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My i-Pod is broken
nobody knows
well it works socially
but I miss the music
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Sean Joyce
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Joseph Daly 02 August 2007

Sean, this is excellent. It reminds me of Simon Armetige. There is a pathos, but delivered so dead-pan. Each stanza is beatifully constructed: 4; 6; 8 lines. That is so brilliantlly thought out but also the measurement is excellently constructed. This is one of the best of these forms of poetry that I have read and shows a craftman's hand at work.

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Sean Joyce

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