she sees beauty in everything
the abandoned factory with its broken windows
telling stories about times gone by
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i found this absoulutely insiring, i was recommended to read this poem, and im glad now that i've read it- keep writing :)
So incredibly deep & heartfelt: you write about someone we all know, with a care & grace that shows the poet is not lacking in that quality of whch she writes...
A passionate assessment of one who finds beauty where she wants....... Excellent.
It's about time you posted again! ! ! Whoah, and what a post it is. Beautifully written Cia and very heartfelt. Well done! Ashley xo
Must beauty have an undercurrent of sadness is the question this lovely poem prompts in my mind Cia? Maybe yes is what I'm thinking straight off since it's a transient thing in its reality or the eye of the beholder, since the eye that beholds must pass too. Maybe not if we love it fully and let the beauty reflect into the seeing eye - for momentary true beauty has something perfect about it... where am I going with this... I don't know but I'm reminded of Burns' lines: But pleasures are like poppies spread; you seize the flow'r, it's bloom is shed; or like the snow falls on the river, a moment white then melts for ever. Anyway, it moved me the way a good poem should. Superb.Ta, jim xxx
so beauty lies in the eyes of beholder not in the object, beautiful ideas, i do love those..... really well penned
Only a beautiful person can see beauty everywhere... smash your mirror - or cheaper - take a beautiful look...!
I like your heart, I guess it the way I'd say it. Each example is well-clothed in its words. The ending...well, it's a bit painful, I was getting used to the pleasurable ride, but it has a ring of truth.
I've looked in the mirror with you and have seen your beauty. When all is said and done, you're still one of my most beautiful friends. elisama
i see beauty in this poem - and you can tell that to the mirror! (really! - do it!)
This beautiful poem reflects the beauty of the poet who wrote it. I am speechless. love, Allie xxxx
She with the eye that is able to see the beauty in all the things decribed in this poem is beautiful. What a delicate, uncluttered little poem so full of imagery and small detail. This poem says so much about you. I hope next time you look into that mirror you see that beauty and grace that comes from within you, and is you. Wonderful poem Cia! Cin
Powerful yet sad inductive ending because everyone has beauty that is unique.Yet very real.Keep writing.