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ou have a blend feelings and poetic views for subtleties of things that happen around you, and your experiences as a human being, and in the end, as a poet, which you translate into... Beautiful poem

Nicely thought out and well penned in verse with rhythmic splendour.

I will blend the edges of this shadow It will be as tin as dew The wind will blow it away And i will be cast away! ! ! Excellent lines! ! Good Poem! ! !