Everything I Love Comments

I really dig the imagery in this poem (especially the vampire streets of dying innocence) , but I can't help wanting to give you a big Christmas hug! Must be the egg nog. Cheers, Lori

How exquisite are these words. I am left speechless...and breathless. I want more.

Dear Uriah, no truer words have been spoken..those closing lines bring a beautiful anguish to my heart, how can we feel so much and go on living? ' how do you wake and how do you dream? do you ever ask yourself? do you pray for stillness? ' wonderfully written my friend...much respect

Uriah, I shan't sleep tonight, worrying about you. Try some relaxation music, or a 'comedy' film, anything to take your mind of all this. Love Ernestine

Oh Uriah! ! ! ! ! ! raynette

Dark, but well-written, buddy. I like the tightness and structure of this. Nice job.

see? You actually did have a Christmas poem in you.

WHEN I READ THE TITLE I EXPECTED A VERY HAPPY POEM BUT IT ENDED UP IN SADNESS...WELL I HOPE IT AIN'T TRUE FOR LIFE HAS A LOT MORE THAN THAT.. BUT A BEY GOOD POEM PEACE AND LOVE ON EARTH **KoNi**

Oh my....so dark and desolate.....very intense Uriah! !

WOOOOWWWWWW that is truly a work of art, well done Mistress Vampire...

Wow Uriah! This sounds like such a nitemare! What a dark poem............beautifully dark. Great work. Sincerely, Mary