Wednesday, May 11, 2016

Everything Goes In Circles Comments

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Take a look around when time is walking on your side
It is just a matter of time when the storm seals your fate
Take a good look inside when your in paradise
It is a manner of life that will take you down
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Dorukhan Baris Oguzcan
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Dr Antony Theodore 28 March 2019

But if you close your eyes anytime There is another world to find Blink until you see another fine line.. very good poem.. life, desire, self. wisdom in your perspective. thank u dear poet. tony

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Unwritten Soul 20 August 2017

Many thoughts in this poem, and i think what you tried to say, everything will have same in common, and somehow it related to each other...about self, surround us, this life and desire, how much time changed us...it just life circle that we have to go and to live...to me as long in our circles, we found what make us free as we could be, find others as company, living harmony..it fine...after all life is not much left once we born.........

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Sranisha Francis 14 May 2016

Hai, milan Beatiful............ But if you close your eyes anytime There is another world to find

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