Everything Comes Back Comments

Great Poem! Should be read and put up schools stores everywhere were people go, Just about the best way to make people contribute to saving the planet, so poetic and beautifully written too!

Good rhymes and a good message. Thanks for posting.

[[ I also have a poem about 'green', as you do, and I hope to finish reading it and leave comments on YOURS sometime. I give Everything Comes Back 5 ***** stars. bri : )

Stanza 5: I would use 'Other beings' life and worth' OR 'Another being's life and worth'.

Stanza 2: Your 'around/crowned' rhyme is clever & 'crowned' fits the situation also. Stanza 4 is a 'GEM'!

Stanza 2: Your use of 'estimate' stumps me i.e. I don't know why you use 'estimate'. Of course I don't know all of Europe's secrets either. '.

[[oops]] ......7 black pigs. And it DID sort of make me 'happy', ...and I wasn't even thinking 'BACON & EGGS'. bri

Pigs? At my wife's new farm today, where I'm not the only 'pig', I've met & fed her 7 black pia

NOW, seriously, I like your poem, but I'd be remiss IF I don't find a 'problem' with it, EVEN if you only fail to dot an 'i'. : )

(cont.) And don't worry if your car's catalytic converter stops working. Yes, LIVE A LITTLE. 'they' may not let you have 'fun' WHERE YOU WILL BE GOING WHEN U DIE! !

Really, Jürgen, The world and Mankind is doomed! ! Live a little while we can. Be a little wild, starting with continuing to use plastic bags [from grocery stores] AND use them JUST ONCE! ! Then DON'T recycle them! ! ! : ) (cont,)

Jürgen, Was IT your front lawn where i threw my empty (bottle) ? ? ?