Friday, February 6, 2009

Everything Burns Comments

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I watch as the world burns,
Knowing there’s nothing I can do.
I no longer try.
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Rachel Brewer
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BreOnna Schneck 08 February 2010

I know how you feel. I invite you to read and comment on my own poem 'Everything Burns'. You describe everything so vividly and clearly its almost like I can actually see and hear what is happening. Excellent.

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