Everything Burns Comments

that was beautiful! ! ! ....awesome! ! ...i loved it \^-^/

line eight through ten mention a reference to sun. The question in line 10 can be answered by looking father into the reference. A sun shines only outward. This is really great.

Thank you very much. Yours is very well done too.

I love this, really beautifully written. Love the imagery and emotion you show. welll done. xx