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I love the thought of your heart being renewed when you find her! I hope you do find her Uriah! You have so much in this poem that I love....flowers, lakes, skipping stones......another wonderful poem! Sincerely, Mary

Another tender piece. The fist stanza is disarmingly musical. Lovely. SUsie.

There is a feeling of real joy in this peice Uriah. The second stanza is particulary strong. I like the flow in this one, that is a product of the theme. The imagery that you employ is lovely.

What a lovely poem world you have created here. Write on, Uriah. Kindest regards, Sandra

I liked this one...it is a good example of bad to good. Very nicely written.