Friday, July 3, 2009

Everything About You Comments

Rating: 5.0

The way you smile
It turns me on
The way you laugh
What can go wrong
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Christabelle Marinelarena
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Macy Fawenden 17 July 2009

I rarely really connect with poems so I guess this refreshes me, because I feel like it could have been written by a maturer, more skilled, future me... which is to say that I hope one day I can be as good as you. Brillliant poem it has to be said.

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