Monday, June 11, 2018

Everyone With Their Crutch Comments

Rating: 5.0

Everyone with their crutch
gimping through life
elements of the physical
emotional, mental and spiritual
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Raymond Farrell
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Mj Lemon 11 June 2018

Really thought provoking work, Raymond. I realized at 'to help one cope' that crutches are almost invariably a metaphor for either coping or something destructive (substance abuse, despair, even death...) . I've found them necessary at times. Your work has me thinking about the possibility that culture sometimes deems what is necessary a sign of weakness...perhaps defeat, perhaps demise. A great work....to myfavourites and a 10.

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Robert Murray Smith 11 June 2018

Raymond, we all rely on something. Your poem is a commentary on that.++10

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Kelly Kurt 11 June 2018

Poignant! True. Sad.

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Raymond Farrell

Raymond Farrell

Perth, Ontario
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