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nice poem...honest feelings about the Almighty....

A beautiful poem, keep on believing in y our Lord don't let no one stand in the way of what you believe is right. In the end all that we have require on earth will surly stay on earth. But are faith no matter how or were we go will remain ours and no one can change what is meant to be! I have one comment I wouldn't give up finding that perfect wife, they say the women is the backbone of a strong man. May Mercy be on our side

i liked this sufist honest feelings. philosophy of companion only with Allah..great work

am speechless! just keep on writting and i will keep on reading

I love how you put your beliefs in your writing and your not afraid of what others think about it.... I like this poem a lot=)

if there is one thing i love about you, its the way you attribute Allah in everything....keep writing...

VERY POSITIVE APPROACH TOWARDS LIFE 'S LIL REALITIES..................

I think it sounds really free spirited. It's good.

Abdallah, you are an excellent writer. You have the gift of expression. your outlook on life is great, and always persue your dreams. You goodness will be richly rewarded someday in heaven. The heart of the poet has spoken. Keep writing and expressing yourself. happiness forver Heather Burns

this poem can apparently highlight your strong mind and religious creed! Wonderful pen! !

I'm not religious, but I think you're right in the fact that people who do good things shouldn't do them to look good and feel proud; they should do them simply because they are good and right. People who do 'good' things to look good aren't truly good at all, they are show-offs.

The best shine is when it comes from heart, do best not because of complement but it surely make u calm and happy when you do it sincerely....and I know your eyes is round like moon shape..to share the warm light to who want to see...in this poem you inspire us a lot, a worth to wait poem...a hope in hopelessness, a gem among the sands..keep it up _Unwritten Soul