On a summer morning, we smile at sunrise,
Plan to walk through fields of marigolds;
You have long hair and a slender body,
You have a necklace of jade
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This is beautiful Uriah! Your heart seems to just exude love and romance.......what a wonderful poem. Sincerely, Mary
Fine work, Mr. Hamilton. The simplicity of the lines evokes the essential complexity of emotion. The last line is a revelation and yet is inevitable.10 from me. Merry Christmas, Hugh
oh, just wonderfully romantic! ! ! i absolutely LOVE IT. :)))
sweet and gentle with beautiful images and such a romantic scenery! Excellent work my friend! HBH
i'm earnestly waiting and thirsting for this feeling. good job, buddy eni da kid