When you walk through the halls
You see how different eveyone is,
We all aren't perfect
Even though people think they are perfect
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Nicole, the poem turned out fabulous. I didn't know you had it in you. Keep writting. Try not to be so negative of your own writting. I know it's hard, but try only to be constructively critical. Otherwise, you're telling yourself that it's bad before anyone else has even given an opinion. ~Lidz
Nicole seriously I read your poems stop putting your self down and making a comment under your own poem. I dont know why you decided to make a fool out of yourself under here but your first poem was really good and then you went way down hill. STOP and start writing peoms that alot of people like. Toodles
Different shades of the same colour, this is why we still connect even when we think we do not.I like this one Love Duncan
Hey Nicole this is your girl Chantel just read your poem and I loved it I love how you made it real and something that is true and not something that someone made up. I love it so much and you should keep making more that are real so keep up the good work LOVE YA!
aren't.... this you write to much... so a poet you are not. Looks like you have gone.... good.