Saturday, November 19, 2005

Everyone Is Different Comments

Rating: 5.0

When you walk through the halls
You see how different eveyone is,
We all aren't perfect
Even though people think they are perfect
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Nicole Bentley
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Born2 Shine 22 March 2010

aren't.... this you write to much... so a poet you are not. Looks like you have gone.... good.

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Lydia Henderson 08 May 2006

Nicole, the poem turned out fabulous. I didn't know you had it in you. Keep writting. Try not to be so negative of your own writting. I know it's hard, but try only to be constructively critical. Otherwise, you're telling yourself that it's bad before anyone else has even given an opinion. ~Lidz

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Chantel Braatz 10 April 2006

Nicole seriously I read your poems stop putting your self down and making a comment under your own poem. I dont know why you decided to make a fool out of yourself under here but your first poem was really good and then you went way down hill. STOP and start writing peoms that alot of people like. Toodles

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Duncan Wyllie 12 March 2006

Different shades of the same colour, this is why we still connect even when we think we do not.I like this one Love Duncan

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Chantel Braatz 11 December 2005

Hey Nicole this is your girl Chantel just read your poem and I loved it I love how you made it real and something that is true and not something that someone made up. I love it so much and you should keep making more that are real so keep up the good work LOVE YA!

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