Tuesday, October 27, 2009

Everyday Street Scenes Comments

Rating: 4.3

One of my favorite things to do
Is to simply enjoy the scenes
On a street named ‘anywhere’
For excitement it always brings
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Marilyn Lott
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Kirk Thomas 29 October 2009

You sound like you enjoy everyday things. I also like to see the beauty of the world where it goes unnoticed by most. I like the flow of this poem and the imagery added to it. Good write.

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Kesav Easwaran 28 October 2009

nicely told Marilyn...so much truth in your words...a lot of 'life' available 'free' there if we watch with eyes and mind...good work...10

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David Harris 27 October 2009

Marilyn, you are so right, I sit in a cafe whenever I can and just watch the people passing and wonder about their lives. The more we look the more we learn. Everyone has a different personality and that comes through in what they wear and what they say. Top marks and thanks for sharing this with us my friend. Hugs David

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Ranjit Ravindran 27 October 2009

I love street scenes a lot. I have experianced all that you have mentioned in here. Nice description Ma'am. A sweet 10. Ranjit.

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