Monday, September 12, 2016

Everyday Miracles Comments

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It was the kind of accident
people will later say,
'It's a miracle no one was killed.'
But that was not the word in Marsha's
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Daniel Brick
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Simone Inez Harriman 04 July 2017

A lucky escape from a crash I assume was caused by the drunken driver. Many poor souls are not so lucky. The drunk man is also a sad victim in a way.

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Daniel Brick 05 July 2017

Yes to both: the drunk caused the accident and he is a sad example of someone under the control of his bad habit. Time to reform. But in the poem I chose to follow Marsha's future life because she has earned the happiness she helps to promote

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Liza Sudina 13 September 2016

scary poetical images.

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