Saturday, August 15, 2020
Everyday Is Valentine Comments
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Timeless is the peace you bring
In Autumn, winter, fall or spring
A loving melody shall i sing
The very day i wear your ring
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Deluke Muwanigwa
15 August 2020
Very good love poem. The rhyming in the last stanza lost the original pattern. Perhaps its deliberate but if not i think the last 4 lines can be re worked. Just a thought.
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7/28/2025 7:30:59 AM # 1.0.0
Something like this so that your rhyming pattern remains intact to the end Go out each night to watch the stars The bright and the dim, the near or far And let every twinkle remind you My love for you is always true Just my thoughts. Beautiful poem