Everyday I Fall Into The Shadows Comments

This is a strong poem, thers feelings put out all throw it. I like it but, its sad, nobody wants to be all alon. We all want someone to care for us and care for them in retern. Ther got be some body out there, so no one can give up just yet. I us to feel all alon and not loved but I have found that there's go to be somebody out ther for evreyone and the jerny in finding them is just geting us pruperd for the life the'll shaer together. So we just got to be strong and keep fighting. this remings me of two poems I wrote 'Im ready to fight' and 'Thers go to be more then this' -good job!

effortless write... u just poured ur heart out....excellent..

So sad, I actually feel the lack of emotion so strongly...nothing left - very good write....Cindy

out of all your poems this is mi favorite.... (: