Everyday Bread Comments

very soulful, beautiful and sad.

Very sad poem, all the war of the world for this loaf of bread

A sad poem on a destitute who earnd by singing. It's great u can express and narrate poeticaly in brevity. So nice to read u again.

just for a loaf of bread or a bowl of rice one hungers for the perfect life where there is nothing lacking and all one's desires are fulfilled..very sad and truthful poem..

A beautiful write. loved your ink and emotions you have expressed. Thanks for sharing.

Beautiful flow of words...Very true said n touching poem, thanks 4 sharing

Touching poem Vijay, that is not an easy life but what can people do, they also need to survive, I always hope that one days things will be easier for them also. Siya_! !

A good poem... Thank you for inviting me to read it.

a good sketch indeed

A really great poem describing life for the poor which is alien to people of the Northern Hemisphere. I congratulate you on the pace of the poem, the simple choice of words and description you have used to make your point.

A very touching poem here.i sometimes wish i had enough money to.help such people.

A day! Help! Help! Another Day! Prayers from such a common man Might date a victory one day.......... Though rising every day To see a loaf of bread Earned through toiling way............a very touching poem.................Vijay

You paint a sad picture in the poem in reality it is so true of poverty in the billions of souls on this earth...its good to bring it to the fore...regards

good thoughts about someone's true adventure in life. toiling for every day bread is something we all must do nicely written

Singing pleasantly Fighting to survive Reality clearly depicted in the poem. And compassion flows. I invite you to read some of my poems. Thank you.

Life of those living in poverty... nicely put.. I like the title!

very touching poem.thank you for sharing

A vivid image of every day life.Good write.

Observation in train and plight of beggers vividly depicted.

Wonderful description of the fight for survival in a poor country. I was very touched by this poem.