it was a vicious attack
thats what they say
a man was beaten badly
and left for dead today
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Hey, girl, it's Darla, from Starlite-didn't know you wrote here as well. I started here, and decided to post some of mine just today....especially the one on my being hurt.....LostSandy.... Darla....see yah. I commented on this earlier at Starlite...still good.
Good question sandy! Some clearly are I'd say. Humans should have enough understanding to realise they have a choice in what they do. I appreciate the predisposing forces of genes and nurture, but they do not fully determine our every move. There is a little scope in the equation for free choice and responsibility. But for some, other irresistible imperatives appear to prevail. Sorry to ramble. You got me thinking with this fine provocative piece of work. Very effective use of repetition.
Animal insticts coming out and reacting to an overly populated enviroment...perhaps?
Morbid poem but true. All of these events have happended within the decade. Keep writing!